Shirous UBW chant

i was listening to his japanese voice... and i realized the english translation that they give u is a little off o.o. I don't really know japanese but i can put together a couple words and a lot of words i can rrelate to korean and this is wat it sounds like to me =/.

His body is made out of swords
His blood is of iron and his heart of glass
He survived through many battles
Not even once escaping
Not even once winning
The holder is here alone
Creating(im guessing forging) iron on a hill of swords
Therefor, my life needs no meaning
This body is made out infinite swords

Im assuming that "his" is referring to archer.

some things just sound bad translated as the original word and you don't want ubw chant to sound like an old chinese poem right?